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A little too bright, but I know, how hard it is to work with snow and light gray weather.
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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And if I do have to point out something, firstly it's the lightness of the color pink as well as the glass of those 'bulbs' which are not prominent enough to me to make it 'stand out' you know. The model could've managed to be in the middle of the photo so she had bulbs around her rather than more on one side than the other.... cause the number of bulbs is lesser. Her hair merge into the background and I didn't like that eye make-up.... but other than that it's a lovely piece of work!
It's hard to get good lighting in these conditions, however you could have used some strobes to make the background a bit darker. If you just want to work with available daylight maybe you could do something in the after processing (burn and dodge tool) and make the background a stop or more darker. the model and the bulbs would pop out more. now the bulbs get a bit lost due to the branches and lost of white in the background.
love the model , hair and makeup! hands are difficult in a picture...maybe you should have covered them with here beautiful hair. I don't like the hair under her arm, personally I think it would been nicer if her hair would be over the arm, so the only skin tones you would see would be of here face so even more attention would go to the face.
I love the mood and it must have been hell for her to pose in this cold wether!
overall its a good concept and a lot of attention was made for the props, styling and posing! good job!
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